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That was great, i was laughing to myself all the way because I got my permit a few months ago and I can still remember my mother's temper tantrum when ...

That was amazing. When i got to the end, I'll admit, my eyes were tearing up a little bit. I'm a sucker for poetry and it was cute in the ...

I generally liked it but i felt that you were leaving a lot out; even when you're writing poetry, you want to draw the reader into some sort of story. ...

First of all, that was a great story. Your writing style reminds me a lot of my own. The theme with heartbreak is very universal and you've got to be ...

I really hope that you continue with this story, it's amazing so far. I'm really curious about what happened to her sister. The way you lead the reader into that ...

Also, I agree that you should have gone into more detail about the boarding of the ship and the actual battle. Another thing that would make this even better is ...