gamechanger10

there were a few moments in this that were semi-funny...if you intended it to be that way...if not...just forget i said that... anyhow, this was lacking originality other than the ...

there wasn't much of a flow to this piece, which is a shame because your wording and imagery is beautiful. that's probably one of the only problems i found. that ...

i agree with hobbes that you have a very deep, intellectual outlook on life for a seventeen-year-old ha! i love how two 13-year-olds told you that! anyway, back to the ...

as i think i can stated, it's annoying to reader's when you post the whole thing in one giant line. unlike him, however, i read the whole thing. it was ...

this poem was very well written, nice job! I loved the structure of it and the rhetorical questions you used in different lines. your images were really...individual and different. I'm ...

alright, so this was pretty good. i just have a few things to point out. Suddenly I soar away Everything else falls away. Here, you rhymed away with away. I'm ...

the imagery in this poem was great, however, i wasn't sure what exactly was going on when the guy got mad... did she dump him? is he just a freakishly ...

As I awake to the rising sun, I look out the cold dew-covered window. Cold might not be needed in this sentence. If you take it out, you could either ...

just to let you know, there is a song by Chris Brown called Wall To Wall, so, yeah. i liked this, though i'm not sure that the repetition of Wall ...

well, this was definately depressing. other reviews have covered the main issues that popped out at me. the biggest one that i saw--and this is just my opinion--is that you ...

personally, i was a tad lost throughout this poem, but you concept was deep...i guess... or my level of comprehension is very limited. this piece is very dark, and i'm ...

the only thing that was wrong that i noticed to be a problem was punctuation. and nolan already took care of that. the imagery and thought behind this poem was ...

this was...um...interesting...you have a lot of gramatical errors that i won't go into. you would simply need to go back and you'd notice them. the most reaccuring one was that ...

sapphire took most of the quotes, examples, etc. that i was thinking of using. so, in order to avoid being unconditionally redundant, let me just say that i really enjoyed ...

well, brother, i put off reviewing this for a while because i wasn't sure what i would say. but i think i got it down to the main points. this ...