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  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Panic

    Hi RavenBlack, Thank you so much for your review. I'm glad to know you enjoyed the poem. By using the word 'muchness', I mean that just as I am beginning ...

    Mar 12, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Panic

    Hi Rachel32, Thank you so much for your review! I really like the happy muchness part and I think it goes well with the poem. I will look into the ...

    Mar 12, 2017
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Panic

    hello ScytheMeister, Firstly, thank you for your detailed review. It means a lot to me Let me explain what I meant with the following lines. a strange desire to fathom. ...

    Mar 12, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, Fantasy Re: It Began In the Market (Poem One)

    Hi! I really liked what you have written. Good job. I was just bit confused and had to read it several times. I suggest you should try and make it ...

    Mar 11, 2017


Remember when dad's shoulders were the highest place on earth and your mom was your hero? Race issues were about who ran the fastest, war was only a car game. The most pain you felt was when you skinned your knees, and good byes only meant tomorrow? And we couldn't wait to grow up.
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