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Hi there! My name is Hope and I shall be the reviewer for your piece! Overall, I think that this piece is relevant to today's society where teen pregnancies are ...

Oh my goodness I am actually tearing up a little bit. This is such a beautiful piece and it is so sad. I really wanted her to beat her attacker ...

Hey there. I agree with what the person who commented before me said about the werewolves living in harmony with the humans. There also were a couple small errors I ...

Hey there! I really like this. I don't know if you made this funny on purpose but there were two lines that I thought were hilarious. images of him dragging ...

This made me laugh. It was such a nice, cute poem. Everyone else pointed out the errors so I pretty much have nothing else to say. Great work and yeah...bye. ...

Hey there! This is an amazing piece. My favorite part was Really I'm just a ghost, cast in chains, in the rain That was a great first line- it really ...

This was hilarious read. Seriously I was laughing the entire time. Where on earth did you get such a brilliant idea? I mean I have never read something like this. ...

Oh my goodness this is intense. At first I was confused because the dad was talking about his wife who you said was dead. Then I kept reading and found ...

Hey again. Great work as always- I can only point out two errors "Take off your close clothes and put this on, Sam . , " Mrs. Manula instructs. Other ...

Wow I really like this. There is a lot of emotion and I feel really bad for Samantha. The only thing I can say is just watch your homophones (like ...

Hey there! I really liked this part- I can tell that you worked hard to improve from the from the first part. :) I am sorry that I can't provide ...

Hey there. First off, I really like this piece. The idea behind the puppet strings is a great one. I agree with the person above me about switching the word ...

Hey there Chris! OK first off let me say that I absolutely love this. The description is beautiful and the characters are fantastic. I knew that you were a good ...

Hey I like this a lot. As the others were saying I was hooked right away and I wanted to know why he was kidnapped. Another thing I liked was ...

Great job describing American stereotypes. It's such a powerful topic and something that should be addressed. The only thing that I can point out is the punctuation while using contractions. ...