gingercinomin

Holas! So here's my review, don't hate me for my opinions pwease!: I understand the overall message, but the verses seem broken up and pieced together, like two different puzzles ...

(~: This is good, I like the rhyme sequence, very catchy. Renewing this with more stanzas would be awesome. While there's no rules against putting the beginnings of your lines ...

Hey fellow writer! This is awesome, but capitalizing "I" would make it even better. I can't see the full meaning of this poem though, you start off with "alone in ...