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  • Short Story » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Shapeless Silence

    Hello Max, I%u2019m thankful for your review and I appreciate the suggestion - I%u2019ll edit it as soon as possible. I read a poem called Bonedog by Eva H.D recently, ...

    Jan 12, 2021
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Uncrossable Canyons

    I appreciate your commentary. Perhaps I%u2019ll be able to reach a common ground for us in my future pieces.

    Jan 10, 2021
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Uncrossable Canyons

    There%u2019s no need to apologize and what I meant is: No one thinks using correct grammar all the time. Sentences are disorganized, words are repeated often, thoughts come back and ...

    Jan 10, 2021
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Uncrossable Canyons

    Thank you for the review, but as my, as I appreciate it, I believe I won%u2019t correct it. As you mentioned, there are some faults in the punctuation and at ...

    Jan 10, 2021
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Uncrossable Canyons

    Thank you for the review, and I am glad you liked it!

    Jan 10, 2021
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Shapeless Silence

    Jesus, this is so bugged. What I meant was: thank you for pointing out the typo and not any of these nonsensical numbers.

    Jan 10, 2021
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Shapeless Silence

    Thank you for the review and for noticing the %u201CI%u201D, in all honesty, it was a typo and I am super embarrassed I haven%u2019t noticed it earlier.

    Jan 10, 2021


The strongest people are not those who show their true strength in front of us but those who win battles we know nothing about.
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