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  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: Ten Seconds

    I'm internally screaming right now. That was the honest-to-God best poem I've read in a loooong time. You did so good! I love how the character evolved throughout the story, ...

    Aug 30, 2017
  • Other » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Argument Between Mother & Son

    Okay, first of all, coddle is my new favorite word. Thank you XD. So, I loved this short little narrative. It was great on it's own, but I'd love to ...

    Aug 30, 2017
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Culture Re: Colors of the World

    I loved this poem. I love how it emphasizes the most important commandments:love others and God, rather than the little ones in Leviticus and throughout that modern-day Christians like to ...

    Aug 29, 2017
  • Other » Realistic, Narrative Re: James

    First of all, let me just say I am so sorry this happened to you. James is a total creep who should drop off the face of the earth after ...

    Aug 1, 2016
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Historical Fiction Re: The Painter

    This is so sweet. I love how inspiring this is. A girl who was born into this world blind, wanting to paint a picture, knowing she will never be able ...

    Aug 1, 2016
  • Short Story » Dramatic, General Re: The Author's Ballad

    OH. MY. GOSH. This was one of the greatest poems I have ever read. Well, I'd call it a free-verse poem. It's not really a story or an essay. But ...

    Jul 31, 2016
  • Script » Humor, Theatre Re: House Of Kehila (Episode 1)

    This story really drew me in from the first scene. It was really entertaining and funny. But I admit I got a little bored at scene 5, but it could ...

    Jul 31, 2016
  • Article / Essay » Realistic, Culture Re: Being white is right?

    If you have Netflix, i'd suggest watching "Dark Girls," a documentary about how women of other ethnicities often experience low self-esteem due to society's Barbie-doll beauty standards. It talks abou

    Jul 31, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Your Values

    *Googles definition of arbitrary* Okay, now i'm ready to review. This is my first review so please don't judge. Your poem was short but powerful. Google defines arbitrary as "based ...

    Jul 31, 2016


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