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Re: 95% of America
hellooo. first things first, i really did like this it was quite interesting. It was also oso true and oso well written. I liked the theme. Next i just have ...
Feb 4, 2009 -
Re: The meaning of: green means go
*****So, this isn't the best, and it needs something, but it's my life. It explains greenmeans-go. a little bit. BEEP! BEEP! BEEP! BEEP! Her alarm screeches, 6:00 A.M., but she ...
Feb 1, 2009 -
Re: Herself
I reaaaaaally like this one. But on account of I know how strongly you feel about it, might i suggest more vivid deets. Like at the beginning, maybe you could ...
Jan 31, 2009 -
Re: Use Your Vocal Chords...SPEAK!
helloo! First of all, I really liked the theme of this and all of your ideas. It is the 100% honest truth, and I greatly enjoyed it. You composed your ...
Jan 31, 2009 -
Re: The Happy
well that was an adventure! traversing the worlds of happy and melancholy. it was real and true and honest, but not in a serious demeanor which was a blast. frankly ...
Jan 28, 2009 -
Re: Running
this intrigues me. i love the one word lines, but i had to read it a few times to get it. it was ominous but i wish i knew the ...
Jan 28, 2009 -
Re: What is Success?
Success. Accomplishing goals, but first you must set them. Achieving and Over-Achieving, then achieving once more. You must Never , Ever Ever , Ever , Ever , Ever give up. ...
Jan 28, 2009 -
Re: NOW!
*****editted finally. so less is more now =]] Standing, Ready, Deep breathes now. The crowd roars; At their feet, one chance one shot one opportunity, Never or Now. A tie; ...
Jan 28, 2009 -
Re: Roma and Julius
i love this. the names are very interesting. the whole story made me smile. it was quite fun. i would only suggest more spaces like between stanzas. but thank you ...
Jan 28, 2009 -
Re: chapter 1 part A
hey girly. i like this story and i really think you should finish it. i want to know how it ends!!
Jan 28, 2009 -
Re: Message Three.
ahhh hannah told me to read this one. i cried. i really did. poor kelly. i loved how u spaced everything it may have just been because its gramatically correct ...
Jan 28, 2009 -
Re: ahh
hello world. so im a little...k very new to this. just wanted to say helloooo and introduce myself... im mary soccer and writing are the life blood that fuels the ...
Jan 28, 2009
