greenwitch94

its more of a short ending then it is a short story. you should describe the situation, then describe the character proposeing to the woman.

Great job on this story. it was very fluent, and was pretty easy to imagne in my head. i do that some times. only with the good stories though. XD

lol. funny story. the dragon should have been a little more rude though. like make marie do something for him to get one of his scales.

this one is just as good as the last one! i hope you'll make a third one, and maybe a fourth one!!

WOW!!! i loved it!! the vampire and the duchess. it was amazing. this story should be made into a best selling series!!

omg, thats so funny when you said what pickachu says in the pokemon languge!! LOLZ :)

oh bravo, bravo!!1 it was very, very good!!!! :)

i thought this was supposed to be an ending not a beginning!!! it was so not better than the original.

wow, awsome job!!! it's like it's from an actual screen play of Supernatural. by the way i love that show. Ruby is such a mulipulative BITCH!!!

i like this. i kept saying to myself that it would be so cool if Ameilia turned Claire into a vampire. i didnt imagine it going like this but its ...

really good!! i bet this is what the book would say if it was from edward's point of veiw insted of bella's ^_^.........YAY for Twilight!!

oh my f-ing god!!! this is so f-ing hillarious!!!!

it was really cool. i thought the part where len's brother is reveiled is really neat. although, i thought this story would have the main character be a witch not ...

very nice!!! medevil setting, crazy king, lieing servant. absolutly splendid!!!

it was ok. knd of dull and boring. like a regular old love story.