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  • Other Poetry Re: Engulfed In Sin

    Hi. What sin is the person committing? this was unclear. i didn't personally like this poem as it was dark and a bit odd, but i thought it was quite ...

    Sep 19, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Fairytale (Us And Them)

    I really liked this poem, and thought that it was quite tastefully done. Its very sad, and I thought that perhaps the ending was a little too empty. You could ...

    Sep 17, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Be Not My World

    I really really loved this! I thougth it was amazing! I loved the bits like where gravity was 'a hug' and the flecks on the nails were 'clouds' and everything. ...

    Sep 17, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Suicide

    I really loved this poem. I thought it was very emotional, and that the slight unclarity (like with who the boy was talking to) was really good. It made me ...

    Sep 17, 2011
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Extracts from a lame time traveler's journal - Part 2

    Nature, regrettably, thought it best to furnish our buck with the agility of a senile tortoise I quite enjoyed this piece of writing and thought that the descriptions were very ...

    Sep 15, 2011


Almost all absurdity of conduct rises from the imitation of those whom we cannot resemble.
— Samuel Johnson