guitargrl1323

Lighting flashed as old chairs creaked, Thunder boomed across the sky A child cries next to a grave. An angel flies, trying to save Across the oceans, across the seas ...

this was good, although i think you could have done a little better with the translation part: komm aus Pari, komm aus Prag, alle Leute haben gefrag’: ‘Wo ist Sonne, ...

This is really good. Short, sweet(ish?) and to the point. I can really relate to this. A really good friend of mine passed away a year and a half ago ...

I liked it. It had a smooth rhythm and was very thought provoking. good job=]

Squeaking swings and tall grass Lying on the ground, watching the world pass Shadows cast and clouds move Creating darkness to calm and sooth I hear the school bell dinging ...