guitargrl1323

Witchling, by Yasmine Galenorn

its fine, just think a little deeper next time you read anything i write

hey, ok so this is a really great poem, but im not quite sure it would work too well as lyrics. the entire i was reading it, i couldn't really ...

this is interesting. i didn't really see anything wrong with it. yes, i know this sounds like a horrible reveiw, i apoligze, im not that good at it. happy writings, ...

for not being a poet, this sure was good. I have to agree with Forever Threnody, keep writing poetry. you never know, you could surprise yourself.

this is really interesting. I didn't find anything wrong with it. a new tittle could be "In Light Of", just a thought ~guitargrl~

i think that all of these are good, but would be better if combined. you have a repeating theme in all of them, a sort of depressing, theres no hope ...

This is good, but the rhyming is kind of confusing. You start out with rhyming, then stop, then start again at the end. I don't know if it's supposed to ...

I don't know anyone else hasn't commented on this, so I will=] it was good....really I guess that answers my question keep it up=] ~guitargrl~

this is really intense. Your hands around my waste. waste should be waist. besides that, good job

this is good, but kind of confusing. try adding more detail and exlpain the situation a little more.

this is really good good. you were right to say that the last line makes the poem. keep writing=]

this is good nice n dark, just how i like them(just kidding) its meaning is kind of confusing though has he died, or did you both break up? keep writing=]

thanks and ya, it's a song

This is really good. Short, sweet(ish?) and to the point. I can really relate to this. A really good friend of mine passed away a year and a half ago ...