gymnast_789

Hey! I really like this! The first thing this reminded me of was a stained glass window. I also think that you used a great choice of colors. It was ...

Ha ha! I loved it! Like other before me I too read this while listening to Poker Face on my iTunes. Thanks for the laughs! Great video also...

Hey Navita, I'm not very experienced with writing short stories, so thanks for the suggestions. Now that I re-read and think about the ending, I have to completely agree with ...

Hey there! I would first like to say that I love all of these pictures. Maybe it is because I love black and white picture with color but I think ...

Hey there! I see we have some things in common... I like pizza (but I'm from Montana so I've never had any good pizza :? ) and my name is ...

Hey, being almost 4 years since I last posted this I thought that maybe I should update this. :) I am now a college freshman studying Aerospace Engineering. I am ...

I used to live in the beige house with dull brown shutters and a thick slab of concrete attached to its waste. Good opening sentence! I love your use of ...

Hello there! I didn't find anything wrong other then the things that people have already commented on. It is a very good story that you told and I know where ...

The story starts out good when you are describing the rooms that they go into. There were a few places though that I thought could use some work: Then there ...

My 'Nicole Narratives' are completely true short stories that I write about my experiences with the woman who has inspired me for the last few years. I hope that you ...

Hmm... very interesting. I enjoy your writing very much. You have a very good vocabulary that you use in your story that makes it interesting all the way throughout. The ...

That’s ridiculous, Frank, I don’t that’s very true. This sentence is kinda awkward. I think its supposed to be " That’s ridiculous, Frank, I don’t [think] that’s very true." Frank ...

January 16, 2009 It made me mad. It wasn’t the fact that he didn’t call me like I asked him to and instead called my cousin. It was the fact ...

He doesn’t realize the ass kissing has to be done before the old hag keels over. I liked this line :D They probably call soda ‘pop.’ Hey...I call soda pop ...

Hello, welcome to YWS! I'm gymnast_789, but most people around here call me gymnast for short. Well, if you have any questions or anything feel free to PM me. Hope ...