hae-won

....I'm a bit overwhelmed by all the corrections, but I will try to correct most of them. Thanks so much for spending the time to read my writing and editing ...

Chap. 1 Absent-mindedly, I twirled the fork around and around until it created a great mound of pasta in the middle of the plate. Then I let it drop, and ...

It was a really clever story! I think you really thought it through. I could never have written something like that. Oh and actually I am a bit partial to ...

It was a great story! I really enjoyed it^^ Especially that part "one of those boys u should just avoid, nothing but trouble" That was really cute! I also think ...

I really enjoyed reading it. I think you have great talent in writing and I hope I get to read all of your stories, Thanks for putting this on. love ...