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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: An Ode to My School

    Haha you're great a rhyming! :) but (even though I do kinda have bad vision) is there any way you can make your lives a bit shorter but it could ...

    Apr 26, 2011
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, General Re: The Horrendous Rock Concert

    I'm SO sorry you had to deal with that! Lol, I personally love rock and metal and that stuff but I would've never held my temper like you did XD. ...

    Apr 24, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Unforgettable Moment

    You need to work on your punctuation, like really bad :). Also, I don't understand what's happening very well, maybe it's just me but you're very descriptive. Work on your ...

    Apr 24, 2011


We shall not cease from exploration, and the end of all our exploring will be to arrive where we started and know the place for the first time.
— T.S. Eliot