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HEYY!!! i got a lot of complaints about un-originality and too much like twilight and not realistic enough. so i wrote a complete make over piece of my original. it ...

OKAY MY AUTHORS NOTES ARE HERE BY IN CAPS JUS FOR FUTURE REFERENCE. THIS IS A TOTAL REMAKE OF MY ORIGINAL STORY. I DONT KNOW WHICH ONE TO EXTEND ON. ...

how do you do that? i know im supposed to edit your stuff kaila... but its really hard. how to you come up with this? what goes on inyour mind ...

I do agree with most of you that this resembles Stephanie Meyer's work, but this is just a passage from the middle. This is not the beginning. Both characters starting ...

OMG. im hooked. like in a real book. i want to just stay up all night and keep reading it and reading it. PLEASE PM me when u get more! ...

this is quite good. in general... im not a fan of fanfiction. but this is good. it fits in well. i would critique it. but im so bad at that. ...

Name: rebecca burgess Age: 16 Appearance: long wavy brown hair w/ dull blue eyes. tall and thin, but athetic body. Personality: single minded to the point of recklessness. wants what ...

this is good because it looks bear like. faces are hard to draw on peope things animals... anything. and you did it. greatly. btw. =D congrats. i rly like it. ...

this story moves way too fast. plus the italics make it hard to focus on. lol. but good job for the most part.

this story moves way too fast. plus the italics make it hard to focus on. lol. but good job for the most part.

this isnt done... not close. i just started writing and this came out. this is not wher i would start the book i will turn this into... but here it ...

OMFG. i love this. kaila, you've out done yourself. this is... wow. seriously. before i read your comment i was thinking about sam. when i heard his name, and that ...

i love the first one. it is sooo... messy. in a great way. it looks creativly thrown together... which brings me to me next point. the second one is wayy ...