haredrier

Hi, haredrier here to look over your story like you asked. I can't say much about the narration or anything like that since it's a real memory, but there are ...

Haredrier here with a review to help kick off RevMo! I liked the concept used here, but there are a few issues I found with the writing. Firstly, there are ...

Haredrier here for a review. Overall the writing was quite good, but there were a few things I felt were off about the work itself. First of all, the source ...

Haredrier here for the final review in the trilogy, although there will be more installments if you upload more and request them. Not much happened in this chapter and I ...

This is Haredrier, here to review another chapter. Overall this chapter added a good amount of intrigue to the story and I appreciate that, but I still feel like it ...

Haredrier here to comment on your work as requested! Firstly, I must say that I enjoyed reading this, and most of the issues have been mentioned before by other reviewers. ...

Haredrier here for a review! I'd say your story has it's moments, but overall needs some work. Firstly, the thing about your story that strikes me as the biggest problem ...

Haredrier here for a review! I really like the lyrics, they remind me of Amon Amarth (the song "For Victory or Death" in particular). There's a part where there the ...

I really enjoyed reading this protion of your story. While I haven't read the other parts of your story, I really like the premise of an intelligent dragon-filled universe. The ...

While I am a fan of crime/ gangster stories, there were quite a few things that I found off-putting about this story. Firstly, there are a large amount of grammatical ...

Great work on the story, the premise is quite interesting and I would like to read more about this story/ universe. However, there are a few things I'd like to ...

This story so far is interesting, and quite well written. However, I have a few issues with it. Firstly, I feel like the formatting could use some work. Seperating the ...

I like these lyrics, they feel like they're written from the heart and are down-to-earth. I know the theme and lyrics are completely different, but I couldn't help but think ...

The writing style is very nice and it offers a lot in the way of chracterization and emotions. To be honest I really liked this story so far, and I'd ...

I quite liked your story so far, but I'm not sure if I would continue to read it for several reasons. Firstly, there doesn't seem to be any characterization of ...