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  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: TheThingsILove

    Your poem is great, and I love how you used rhyming and made it simple. But I agree with the other author that a few lines seem a little forced. ...

    Nov 29, 2011


Poetry is my cheap means of transportation. By the end of the poem the reader should be in a different place from where he started. I would like him to be slightly disoriented at the end, like I drove him outside of town at night and dropped him off in a cornfield.
— Billy Collins