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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Voices

    I feel like the 1st line and the 3rd line are a bit contradicting, basically you look too fake but you have to look perfect. But it also shows how ...

    Dec 9, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Who can I trust?

    I like how you kept the rhyming and structure of your lines consistent. I would of liked if you used more personal detail. Also, you don't have to put a ...

    Dec 9, 2013


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