hekategirl

Very nice poem, I really liked it! But for some critiqe: "Leathery wings, Take me high. Desperately, I hold on tight. " That stanza sort of started the poem off ...

I agree that there is something missing from this poem but I can't put my finger on it. But overall I really like this poem! the only thing I didn't ...

They were both beutiful, I love duet poems like this. The rythm was a little off but the beutifullness of the poem covered it up. I really like this one ...