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Re: I think I'm in love (with the rain)
I love this poem so much! I love that you didnt have to use much discription or go on and on to get a vivid mental image to the reader. ...
Apr 5, 2013 -
Re: Rich from all that I see
I love this poem. I will start off with the only negitive feedback i have "I would know all the hush –hushes, the tales and stories of life that need ...
Apr 5, 2013 -
Re: Help.
The only criticism I have is a few spelling errors. "Such fuckig manners. After finishing I want into my room put on my headphones." *Fucking and the only other one ...
Apr 5, 2013 -
Re: All We Saw Was Blue
I simply love this story. I only have one peice of negitive feed back. Personaly, i think the way the ages were just thrown into paragraph 3 sounded a bit ...
Apr 5, 2013 -
Re: Did you blink?
I loved reading this! You have to write more. The way you opened definatley grabbed my attention right away. I love how much details you have in certian parts expecially ...
Apr 5, 2013