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Great work. I *LOVE* translating my characters into art. Along the same lines, I often find it terrifying. I mean, I have this mental image that is so well-constructed and ...

((This story is much different from my normal writing stuffs. Fan fiction isn't really my thing, but my little brother is pretty big into it. He's a gamer, and recently ...

Good stuff. First off, there are a few grammatical problems. Re-read it carefully, and you'll find them. (I like to read it backwards so that I'm seeing it in a ...

Hey Hey. I'm enjoying this so far. Very nice writing, and what seems to be the making of a wonderful heroine. I think I have just a few critiques. First ...