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herbgirl

  • Poetry » General, General Re: not all surprises want to be unwrapped.

    Hello! herby here for a review. I like this poem. It kind of represents how my mind is set right now, although not really about Christmas. I liked the sixth ...

    Dec 23, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Humor Re: Avery Trent - Chapter 2 (Jason Volks)

    Well, another good story! I'm really starting to like this Avery guy. I really like your writing style, but I feel like your lacking detail. Like, I have no idea ...

    Sep 13, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Humor Re: Avery Trent - Chapter 1 (Renegade Sneeze)

    Hahaah ahaha ha! Oh my gosh! This was fabulous! Absolutely fabulous! Okay, let me just compliment you for a little longer. I thought this was really funny! SEarching for a ...

    Sep 13, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: Cost of Memories

    Hi! This is herbgirl, and I'm here to review your poem! This was a really nice poem. However, I don't feel like there was enough emotion in it. You seem ...

    Apr 27, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: there was a time

    Wow! This is a great poem! When I first started reading it I thought it was just going to be 'oh, a kid grew up, now they regret it, blah ...

    Apr 25, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: in which two people fall out of love

    Hello! herby here for a review! I really like this poem. Like you said you'd never really done anything like this, I've never read anything like this, and I think ...

    Mar 4, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: Pinky Fingers and Whispered Words

    Hi! herby here for a review. This is a really cute poem. The quaint, wild, idea of a childhood friendship that morphs into a tight bond all through adolescence. It ...

    Mar 2, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Deleted 55

    Hello! This is herby, here for a review. I'll start with the title. I think it fits the poem absolutely perfect. Next, I really like the beginning of this poem. ...

    Mar 2, 2015
  • Poetry » Humor, Other Re: Oddball Object {1}

    Hello! herby here for a review! First of all, I really like your new idea for a series. Have you got any others like it out yet? I would love ...

    Mar 1, 2015
  • Poetry » Humor, Realistic Re: To Own A Cat

    Hey! herby here for a review! I LOVE THIS POEM!!!!! It is so relatable, right? I own a cat, we don't really know how old she is because she was ...

    Mar 1, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Mystery / Suspense Re: The Child

    Hello! herby here for a review! So, first of all, I really like the sense of mystery in this poem. It makes you want to know more about what happened ...

    Mar 1, 2015
  • Other » Romantic, Realistic Re: His name was John

    Hello! This is herby, reporting for a review! First of all, great title. It really drew me in, as did the first couple of sentences. I saw some things you ...

    Feb 28, 2015
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: I Remember Then

    Hi! I'm herby, here to review! I like this poem. I like it especially because it is relatible. I have the same feeling of missing what I had when I ...

    Feb 28, 2015
  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: idk first poem---not very good

    Hey, this is herby here for a review! First of all, I like the length of this poem. I write short poems too, and our readers may think we're just ...

    Feb 28, 2015
  • Poetry » Humor, Realistic Re: Plenty of fish in the sea (Short funny poem)

    Ha! I think this is funny! You start reading it, and your all serious, then it ends with a laugh! Great! Of course you could have meant it symbolicly, but ...

    Dec 12, 2013


The same boiling water that softens the potato hardens the egg. It's about what you're made of, not the circumstances.
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