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  • Short Story » General, General Re: Roping Dolls

    i have just a few complaints (all spelling errors aside): 1. She had lost her best friend, next-door-neighbor and study-buddy in one clean sweet. Ut was hard to walk by ...

    Mar 10, 2006
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: before they met

    i wanted to do give you a detailed crit, so here i go: She was aware of him. Since before she could remember she had known him, and now he ...

    Mar 8, 2006
  • Short Story » General, General Re: The B Train

    There were some interesting parts in this. Particularly: It was as though the subway brought out the best in each and every one of these women, but no matter what ...

    Mar 7, 2006


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