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The whole flow is a little iffy, but the imagery and use of words are rather nice. I do suggest that you try to move on to more original subjects, ...

The whole flow is a little iffy, but the imagery and use of words are rather nice. I do suggest that you try to move on to more original subjects, ...

At first, I was a little iffy about it. But then I read the whole thing, and I absolutely fell in love with it. I have to agree with the ...

I really believe that this was absolutely dazzling, as strange as it may sound. I love the whole idea, the imagery, the metaphors, descriptions, emotions. It's all very amazing, and ...

This is very great. Yes, the flow gets a little iffy here and there, but in all honesty, who cares? It is beautiful enough as it is, and I love ...

All I really want to say is that I love the beginning, it simply slides off the tongue. Very great (:

I really like the imagery here. Very beautiful. I really don't have anything to say.

I think this is rather beautiful, but it shouldn't be to the right, it made it somewhat confusing!

welp. here I go. Two sets of stairs, but I soar to the top. Three hallways down, yet I still never stop. We open each door, and we break all ...

Flower, the poem is about drugs. I'm usually not the type to write poetry just to write, although thats perfectly fine. I like each and every line to have a ...

well done! I do have to agree, you have very lovely imagery. My only concern is this last line. I think it could be a little trippy. It seems too ...

Lovely! I honestly have no advice, haha. This was beautiful. I loved the twist, the vocabulary, the imagery. You are a great writer, never stop.

I really loved this. It really did fill me up with emotion. And the title actually helped a lot, as obvious as it was, and made me feel the pain ...

Thank you for writing this! I miss the 90's so much. Better music, better cartoons, just better. Thank you!

I really liked this. And I loved how the boy asked to eat the peanut butter after he got it out. Wahaha. Story of my life.