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Hey! Holly here for another review! This was an all-around awesome poem and just wow! The only part I didn't really understand was when you included a verse between parentheses. ...

Hey Holly here for a review! Do you go to Da Vinci Junior High? I did this project last year. Your story was pretty good. You might want to work ...

Hey! Holly here for a review! This is a really good poem. There are just a few nitpicky things that I have to point out. (Sorry!) First off, when you ...

Hey! Holly here for a review! This poem in absolutely gorgeous! I love the way that the lyrics just flowed and fit each other! I also like how Earth is ...

Hey! Holly here for a review! I love this poem, and yes, I did get the reference! The stanzas were a bit weird though and could have used some improvement. ...

Hey! Holly here for a review!! First off, this is beautiful! I like how you really captured me and and I could really feel the emotion of what you were ...

Hey, hey, hey! Holly Mc signing in for a review! I don't normally review poetry so I'll give it my best shot. The first thing that came to mind when ...

Hey hey hey! Holly signing in for a review! Let's get right to the point. I didn't really understand the format of this short. It might have been artistic, but ...

Hey! Holly signing in for a review! Um wow! That was amazing! I totally loved it! It was a bit short but it's jam packed with info. I noticed very ...

Hey! Holly signing in for a review! The title of your story really caught my attention, good job! " The vibrant, pink ball I held skidded across the floor – ...

Hi! Holly here for a review! First off, welcome to Young Writers Society! I love your username! It was a good read and I enjoyed it. I could kinda relate ...

Holly here for a review!!! I loved your poem! It made me go to a museum in my head and imagine what it looks like! You know that you're a ...

Holly signing in for a review! It was a bit short. I wonder if you could have given your poem a bit more background. Capitalization is important. I kinda stopped ...

Holly McGuinness signing in for a review! It was a good story. I don't really understand the format of the story though. I feel that a bit more character description ...

Holly signing in for a review! It was a very long short! The title caught my attention, good job on that! I feel like it was a bit to much ...