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“ I dont think you want this to be in quotation markd. Large globs of melting chocolate ice cream dripped over my hand and I tried to lick it up ...

“ I dont think you want this to be in quotation markd. Large globs of melting chocolate ice cream dripped over my hand and I tried to lick it up ...

“ I dont think you want this to be in quotation markd. Large globs of melting chocolate ice cream dripped over my hand and I tried to lick it up ...

“ I dont think you want this to be in quotation markd. Large globs of melting chocolate ice cream dripped over my hand and I tried to lick it up ...

Surprise Heather and Bri met me at the door when I got home. “Mandi, Mom’s gone into labor.” Heather said. “But she isn’t due for another month.” I said with ...

Authors Note: I know the formating is weird. Its the website not me sorry. Also, I have edited this story so many time I can't count. When you edit please ...

I really liked this and can't wait to read more! There were no vivid errors I saw but I wasn't reading carefully I kinda forgot you were wanting to be ...

This is good although to nitpick Hey. ” I say as I stash the bag. I'd use a comma instead. but thats me The comma after hey.

Chapter One My alarm went off, disturbing the silence that was surrounding me. I got up slowly, stretching every muscle in my body. I got dressed without a hesitation, having ...

Chapter One My alarm went off, disturbing the silence that was surrounding me. I got up slowly, stretching every muscle in my body. I got dressed without a hesitation, having ...

God is this sad. But good and I felt a connection to the characters which made it so sad so kudos on that one :) -Jenn

I REALLY liked this it was romantic and made me wish I had a boyfriend like that

Ok I enjoyed it it was good

Authors Note: this story used to be about a 22 year old not a high schooler so please DO point out the mistakes that are simply because of the age. ...

Authors Note: this story used to be about a 22 year old not a high schooler so please DO point out the mistakes that are simply because of the age. ...