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Re: An Uphill Battle
Ok, so this is for my creative writing class. It's not that great so it would help me a lot if you guys could give me a little feedback. -There ...
Apr 14, 2009 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here [5]
Aww Muse your so pretty! Ok here goes- My best friends and I...don't ask
Apr 22, 2008 -
Re: rain on roof tops[Updated]
First off, did you use spell check? Just curious, because you have a lot of misspelled words. I think this could have a lot of potential, but I think you ...
Apr 22, 2008 -
Re: Love From The Bowels Of Non-Existence
Hey I agree, it would be easier to read if it was spaced out. Athough, I did read it and I did like it very much. There was a part ...
Apr 22, 2008 -
Re: Cheater (or Confrontation)
Yeah, I understand where your coming from, trying to get the emotion across with dialogue. It gets the point across, and I understand like her anger and how mad she ...
Apr 22, 2008 -
Re: Truly, Madly, Deeply
I'm really sorry guys that there are so many mistakes. I revised it and hopefully it's better. Truly, Madly, Deeply “We can’t do this guys!” I hurried after my friends ...
Apr 22, 2008 -
Re: Truly, Madly, Deeply
Haha sorry guys
Apr 17, 2008 -
Re: Speech
Ok, i'm on our speech team at school. I was wondering if anyone knows of a good prose piece that I could possibly look at for next year?
Apr 17, 2008 -
Re: Truly, Madly, Deeply
Ok, tell me what you guys think and what I need to work on (which I know is a lot). I have written anything in awhile so here it is... ...
Apr 17, 2008 -
Re: vampyre leagacy chapter two
This was very good. I love the description, but i also think that when you are introducing all of the other people maybe you should split it up a little. ...
Apr 17, 2008 -
Re: Cheater (or Confrontation)
I really liked this, I think it was wirtten well and had very good dialogue. But I also think the F-word was used a little too much and I think ...
Apr 17, 2008