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One moment, as I think about it, I smile. I remember the way we freezed everything for a while, (Froze) The rush we've made when we're so excited. (The rush ...

Wow, This is amazing! I love your ... whats the word??? I think I love the way you wrote this. I am no genius in poetry but I often also ...

Hi Hudz here, You have a very nice poem. I just have a few things to point out, if I may. I feel like your poem could have been so ...

*tears* Corrections: 2nd to last paragraph i think you wanted to write What i thought, was a chid ish dream To love whomever I please, and not be considered a ...

Heya :) My Soul Cries.... i think its supposed to be Cries... and not crys And tell me What you see... I think you should make the third line like ...

The mist of morning seeped through my window like tiny wisps of ghost white locks of hair I think you should put a full stop there and then start with ...

Beautiful work i love it. Maybe you could add another non-rhyming line at the end to set the whole poem off because it stopped abruptly, but other then that i ...

I certify that this is a review that only needs three words I Loved It! three words and a smile :D

Oh my dear that is a very dramatically sad poem... great goodness!!! a poem does not have to rhyme but it has to ... flow. First three lines are great, ...

Whoa sweet girl, that's alot of sweet unhappiness. Straight to the point..... I like it. It might use a little too much "sweet" in it, but i think that may ...

You have a million reviews to this and usually i would not review it again, because it would mean another person added to the dozen who have already reviewed your ...

Wow, i don't think live1out2loud7 understood the way you have written this, but wow i love this its amazing, i think its a very new and nice way to write, ...

Oh my GOd!!!! you have gotten tears in my eyes... oh god i cant even say anything....ummm wow i..um that was so beautiful... no poem in this site has ever ...

:( That is so sad, i hate the ending though its my favorite part. Dont take this in a wrong way please but the last part was the only perfectly ...

Hey sorry for not replying earlier. Why is it every other chapter i read becomes my favorite from all the rest. (: despite the fact that Dr.Roberts is probably the ...