iGlamour

Before reviewing, I would like to ask, is English your first language? Or do you speak another language? What is your mother tongue? Yes, yes it is. In fact, being ...

Okay, I've updated the prologue. Hopefully it's better now. If there are still some improvements I could make, please day so.

Thank you! I was actually wondering about there being too much information in it - especially the bit about her childhood. As for the cliché, I think your actually right. ...