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  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Fantasy Re: The Case of the Necromancer-For-Hire Chapter 5

    I've been dormant for a few weeks! This is my first review in awhile! Anyway, I read over the chapter and I thought some parts of it were funny! Especially ...

    Oct 24, 2015
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Action / Adventure Re: The Young Guardians

    Hello and happy review day! I know this review might be kind of random, but I was digging through the short story section, and here I am! Putting Young Writet's ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Science Fiction Re: Muster Heroes – QuickSave 10

    I'm really sorry that I'm reviewing the tenth chapter without any prior knowledge! I guess it's better than nothing! Oh and by the way, happy review day! After reading through ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, General Re: Slit ch 7

    Hello and happy review day from iamanaspiringwriter! I liked this chapter, I apologize, as I have not read the previous chapters. I think it's just a matter of looking over ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Historical Fiction Re: The Chains of Duty Chapter 13: Incant

    Hello! Happy review day from iamanaspiringwriter! I apologize that I have no read the previous chapters, so I guess here goes nothing! First, I'd like to say that I think ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Teen Fiction Re: Chapter 9-- Lone Voice Radio: Part I

    Hello, and happy review day from iamanaspiringwriter! I have not read any of the previous chapters, so this review is solely based on this chapter! Now on with the review! ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Romantic Re: DUET :Chapter 5:

    Hello, and happy review day! I apologize in advance, my review will not be based/mention anything about any previous chapters, as I have not read them. Overall, I thought this ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Dramatic Re: The Pink Portrait, Ch. Eleven

    Warning: I have not read any of the previous chapters! I apologize! Now for the review. (Oh and happy review day!) Anyway, I liked the story! This chapter was pretty ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, General Re: Saving Kelsea Ch. III

    Hello! Happy review day! I apologize in advance, I haven't read the previous chapters, however I do like the story. When you first said that the twins thought Warren was ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Fantasy Re: Chapter 3.1, The Name Game

    I haven't read the previous chapters, so I apologize in advance. Happy review day! I read through your story and the plot definitely interests me. I did not see any ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: A Snap-Dragon Stolen Chapter 5: (part 2)

    Hello! It's review day today, I'm sorry I have not read the previous chapters. I saw this has been in the Green Room for awhile, so I thought I would ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Ludwig. (chapter 2)

    Hello Mikons3! Happy review day! I think your story is great so far, I've just got a few nit-picks I would like to point out. "Moon is full, shines bright ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Other, Other Re: Radical Kills [Chapter two: 'One Down']

    Hey KyotoMylo10! Happy review day! With this story, I noticed a few places where I thought the sentences didn't flow right. I don't think I'll mention them because I feel ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Other, Other Re: Radical Kills [Chapter one: 'Deliberation']

    Hey! Happy review day! Overall, I liked your story and I thought your detail was good as well as your personal voice. I really don't have any corrections, except this ...

    Sep 27, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Romantic Re: Terminate - 2 Part 2

    Hello! Iamanaspiringwriter here for review day! Overall, I thought your story was cool (I read the previous parts so I wouldn't be completely confused going into this). I'm guessing this ...

    Sep 27, 2015


You got rid of them. Yes, that's just like you. Getting rid of everything unpleasant instead of learning to put up with it.
— Aldous Huxley, Brave New World