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  • Short Story » General, General Re: The Dream

    The only criticism I have is that the imagery seems a tad overdone, and so a lot of it runs together. Otherwise, very sweet, I love how so many things ...

    Feb 5, 2007
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: One from the vaults

    I loved the quick, restless form this piece took, it really set the mood and brought across your point, which I feel is that the typical comforts and inspirations that ...

    Feb 5, 2007
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: A poem about a very old tree

    I like the progression from plant, to animal, to human events, and also the different times of day. It speaks of different times in the world's development. I like the ...

    Jan 31, 2007


Sea and Sky- both blue. Once, in proposal, Sea turned red. Sky's father- Sun forbade so she wept as rain, uniting the lovers in defiance.
— AlexWrites