inimitablebeauty

teardrop, i get what your saying and i adding punctuation and capitalization and divided it into stanzas thanks:) -

i like it. my favorite part is when you wrote about how her lessons are tantalizing. what made it so interesting? just curious. -

i agree with Bird on this one i think people are more prone to remembering a poem if it rhymes

i enjoyed how you portrayed the whole year in just 4 paragraphs well done:)

this is great i dont have any critsism about this one

this peice actually reminds me of a poem i did called Vanished As If You Weren't There i really like your work its awesome

i look forward to reading more from you

i totally relate to the lines: "I blame my shyness,but being quiet helps.When you listen, you learn,and now I know more about him" this happens to me all the time(and ...

okay i know people have commented about the awkwardness but i really liked it. it is hard to rhyme words and still make sense(i.e. "hello young mellow fellow, my jello ...

i really felt your grief in this one. keep writing!:)

we walk together at the airport i brace myself for the goodbye i see the excitment and the grief in your eye you want to leave, but you want to ...

You psychopath! I hate to feel your burning wrath. Everyday like a bottomless cookie jar of spider filled cookies. Whenever I disobey, "Conduct mark" is what you say. Conduct mark, ...