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Re: Welona - Chapter 2
Hey, Bisc! Storm here for a second review, so let's get to it! Terri knew she looked like her; everyone said that… But no way was she that beautiful. Ellipses ...
Jan 4, 2018 -
Re: Welona - Chapter 1
Hi Bisc! Storm here to review, as promised, so let's begin! The sky above the treetops was grey, pretty much white in fact. I'm not a fan of this opening ...
Jan 4, 2018 -
Re: Cedar Ravine: 1.2
Hey, rosette! Storm here to review, as promised, so let's jump right in! I didn't come out of my room that day. I'm not a big fan of this line. ...
Jan 4, 2018 -
Re: Cedar Ravine: 1.1
Hi rosette! Storm here for a review, so let's jump right into it! Cedar Ravine was an ugly town. I really really like this for a first line. It doesn't ...
Dec 17, 2017 -
Re: Reputation -Chapter 1-
Hey, DarkenedPens! Storm here for a review, so let's jump right into it! Before I even read this, I noticed that you had extremely long paragraphs. No one wants to ...
Nov 24, 2017 -
Re: bubbles (part one of "depression")
Hey, DemonGoddess! Storm here for a review, so let's jump right into it. The first thing I noticed was your repetition. I can see how you'd want to play around ...
Nov 1, 2017 -
Re: Avery Trent - Chapter 5 (Terra Down)
Hey, hatt! Storm here for a review this fine Review Day, so let's jump right into it! His polished exoskeleton glimmered in the light of the pink supernova above. So ...
Oct 29, 2017 -
Re: Spruce Woods (The Eastcliff Series #1) - Chapter 42
Hey, jamgalloway! Storm here for a review this fine Review Day, so let's jump right into it! I'm going to use the same format as before but talk about the ...
Oct 29, 2017 -
Re: Spruce Woods (The Eastcliff Series #1) - Chapter 40
Hey, jamgalloway! Storm here for another review this fine Review Day. (I'm apparently reviewing this backwards), so let's jump right into it! I think I know what's going on plot-wise ...
Oct 29, 2017 -
Re: Spruce Woods (The Eastcliff Series #1) - Chapter 41
Hey, jamgalloway! Storm here for a review this fine Review Day, so let's jump right into it! We’ve gotten to one of the more disturbing parts of the Japanese movie, ...
Oct 29, 2017 -
Re: Avery Trent - Chapter 4 (Ribbits and Rain)
Greetings Hatt! Storm here for a review this fine Review Day (and also here to earn my fourth star) so let's get right into it! Avery had protested, stomping at ...
Oct 29, 2017 -
Re: How Was Your Day? - Chapter 17.1
Hey, Querencia! Storm here for a review this fine Review Day, so let's jump right into it! And it still hurt, only now things were going completely pear-shaped, and with ...
Oct 29, 2017 -
Re: Avery Trent - Chapter 3 (Less-Goods on Terra)
Hey, hatt! Storm here for a review this fine Review Day, so let's jump right into it! He had a feeling that it should look very strange, but it didn’t. ...
Oct 29, 2017 -
Re: False Alarm
Hey, Jashael! Storm here for a review this fine Review Day, so let's get right into this review! We've seen too many sunsets Bridges burnt down to ashes But have ...
Oct 29, 2017 -
Re: Chapter 5.3
Hey, Silver! Storm here for a review this fine Review Day, so let's jump right into it! In advance, I'm sorry if I ask dumb questions. I haven't read the ...
Oct 29, 2017