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Re: Broken dreams and glasses
Hi! Iris here to leave a review :) Starting off, this is amazing! I love how it's so simple yet it's not. You've written this poem and it feels like ...
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Re: Fisherman questions life
Hi! Iris here to leave a quick review!
Apr 12, 2023 -
Re: boyhood kommos
Hi :) Iris here to leave a quick review! One thing you've done wonderfully is including so many details in so few words. I often find that I don't like ...
Mar 26, 2023 -
Re: Lots of short stories-Clowns, magic, murder, and lies.
Hi hi! I'm gonna leave a quick review
Mar 26, 2023 -
Re: in the mirror i saw my life’s erosion
Hi! Iris here to leave a quick review ^^ I won't lie, this piece is beautiful. I love the way you wrote it in all lowercase letters, and I feel ...
Mar 26, 2023 -
Re: Strength
Hi! I'm not the best at reviewing works of literature, but here goes- You say he/him/his/etc. a lot, and I recommend saying Peter's name more instead. It gets a bit ...
Mar 20, 2023