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First, it's a good idea. I find it strange that his mother knocked a cup of tea against the door, but thats probably just my interpretation. A more clear way ...

I like the idea. I myself use glasses and I admit some things do look better without them. Remember to capitalize each line and after periods.

An interesting poem. Very deep and beautiful in its own way, however, it seemed a little intense.