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  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: A Girl Dies in Boston

    The emotion this poem had to it is great, but I think you shoul either add more rhythm to it, or take out the rhyme. Otherwise, it's great.

    Aug 28, 2012


What orators lack in depth they make up for in length.
— Charles de Secondat, Baron de Montesquieu