jBlack_girl

(i have started this book and I wanted to see if anyone liked it before i moved on with it) "Whats happening?!" "I don't know, you tell me!" Kattie and ...

I know you and you have not been feeling the best this past week and if you think about it then you will know what i am talking about. I ...

He was brought here on sunday. He left on a sunday. She came on her own. She left with a friend. They came in silence. They leave out loud. People ...

I think that was very interesting and that it was very reasonably smart/clever that you would use a personal experience. That way no one can correct you on the information ...

it was very intreeging. That poem sounded as though he were still a love but not for long. It sound as though he could crack at any time and he ...

I'm lost. You're found. I'm blind. You see. As long as I am with you forever, then anything is fine with me.

that was very interesting. I was, in a way, depressed to read this but at the end it was sort of releasing and I felt as though I was her ...

i thought that was very heart felt but it didn't flow as well as it should have and i kind of got lost within the words. The meaning was not ...

That was amazing!!!! I thought it was very intemate with the feeling of true blindness in life. It was very deep and touching and I could really and truethfully feel ...

i think that it was in a way depressing and yet also releasing but at about the middle point I got lost.You should us egood words to make it so ...

I think that it was great but you could use a more colorfull vocabulary and it sort of seemed like you had no other ideas and hit writers block 8)