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  • General Fiction Novels Re: Fog in the Garden (Chapter One)

    Hi! I'm Jessica, and I'll be second to review "Fog In The Garden" First of all, I agree with Lily that this is wild. It's all too fast, and remember ...

    Oct 17, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Laundry Basket

    I wrote this for ultraviolet's contest. We were supposed to write about an object, and I got assigned to a Laundry Basket! I'm not to pround of this.. yet. So, ...

    Oct 17, 2010
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Closeing The Door On My Past- Chapter Three

    Hi Libby! I'm here to review the third chapter of Closing The Door On My Past. : D I'll start with nitpicks. She stood up. Just to be safe, I ...

    Oct 13, 2010
  • WRFF Archive Re: Jessica's Critique Studio ( Re-Opened )

    Sure, and just wanted to let you know that I have been reading A Shot Of Arrogance all along. : D Love it and can't wait for the next chapter!

    Oct 12, 2010
  • Science-Fiction Novels Re: Hatched Chapter One

    I'll try and edit this, and add on to it too. Thanks to everybody who reviewed!!

    Oct 12, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: To My Guardian Angel

    Hey Libby! I just wanted to tell you that I love this and I'm so sorry! Something I'd use to describe this wonderful poem is beauty with an edge. But ...

    Oct 12, 2010
  • Science-Fiction Novels Re: Hatched Chapter One

    Awesome, thank you!

    Oct 12, 2010
  • WRFF Archive Re: Please, Sir... Can I have some more reviews?

    Why not? Here you go; Hatched Chapter One... Thanks in advance! - Jessica

    Oct 11, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Sketch of a guy ^_^

    Hey Skins! I just wanted to say I really like this! Your an awesome drawer and I could never draw like that, not even close. It's very detailed and I ...

    Oct 11, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: To My Guardian Angel

    Hey Libby! I just wanted to tell you that I love this and I'm so sorry! Something I'd use to describe this wonderful poem is beauty with an edge. But ...

    Oct 11, 2010
  • WRFF Archive Re: Jessica's Critique Studio ( Re-Opened )

    Would Anybody Like A Review??

    Oct 11, 2010
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Morphia Chapter Two

    Okay, thanks! I'll definatly work on that, and sorry it sounded so cliche. : )

    Oct 11, 2010
  • Science-Fiction Novels Re: Hatched Chapter One

    Supernova ) Okay! Thank you, and I'll be sure to use your advice while writing the following chapters. Dahanain13 ) Thanks a bunch and welcome to YWS by the way! ...

    Oct 10, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: The Army (BVB)

    Wow, nice one! This is really intense and super real, I love it and I can't stop reading it over and over again! *clicks like button* - Jessica

    Oct 7, 2010
  • WRFF Archive Re: For anyone who just wants a review!

    Hey, would you mind reviewing "Hatched Chapter One" for me? Thanks in advance!

    Oct 7, 2010


The grand in the hotel rings with broken tunes; the guests frown; the concierge winces. But the blue-hatted boy is happy and braver than they.
— TheMythMaster