jaani

i am not disrespecting you as a writer, because not too long ago i would write just like you (if not worse) this is a normal stage for beginning writers, ...

the structure of the poem almost makes it concrete-like. (it kind of looks like a staircase to me haha) the poem is jagged but with a certain elegance to it. ...

this poem is absolutely gorgeous. it is the first one i have read on this site and it did not disappoint me in its welcome! the way you braid words ...