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  • Short Story » General, General Re: Spotlight

    @Snake7 I see your point about the ending, I'm working on a better way to conclude the story, but the whole point is that spotlight is just a game, and ...

    Jul 8, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Edge of the Universe

    Wow - this poem is simply amazing! Each and every word is perfect, there is absolutely nothing wrong with it (and I'm usually very picky). Great work :)

    Jul 8, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Coward

    What a beautiful poem. It's completely honest and true; the perfect words to describe a coward. Just remember, opinion only has one P. Happy writing :)

    Jul 8, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Masquerade

    Thanks Jelly, I'm glad you liked it :) I'm not quite sure if I'm going to continue this story, since I am working on another novel at the moment, but ...

    Jul 8, 2011


As a former (and rather excellent) liar herself, Aru knew that, sometimes, speaking the truth felt like wrenching a thorn out of your side. But doing the opposite meant pretending it wasn't there. And that made every single step ache. It was no way to live.
— Roshani Chokshi, Aru Shah and the Nectar of Immortality