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Re: our kingdom
Hi Jegde here for a review This was a lovely piece! I really enjoyed reading and seeing how unique it was. There are a few things I think you can ...
Nov 23, 2016 -
Re: Money Minded
Hello, Jegde here to review this fine piece of artwork! Okay so I just wanna say this was a fantastic poem and I really enjoyed it. There weren't many flaws ...
Nov 22, 2016 -
Re: Glitch (part 1 of 2)
Whoa. This is a very interesting story. I was very excited to read this. Now onto my review Few nit picks He left a few years ago to attend another ...
Jul 29, 2015 -
Re: A Man, His Two Daughters, and The Legacy Foretold (Part 1)
This story is great! Few errors. you changed the point of view without giving any warning to the readers and i kinda got confused. Just say so and so's POV- ...
Jul 26, 2015 -
Re: The Heart of a Career Part 2 (Unfinished)
THIS IS SO GREAT(sorry for the caps) I just finished reading the whole story and i am devastated that i have to wait for more. I Love the whole concept ...
Jul 25, 2015 - Re: Heart Aside Jul 24, 2015
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Re: Bad Lights, Good Lights [Chapter 1.0, Rewritten]
Labrador, this is a very interesting concept. I like the way you wrote this but try not make it too cliche- with the abusive father and crying in the toilet. ...
Jul 24, 2015 -
Re: The Spark [0]
This is so good!! love to see more. Hunger games is basically my life. ok now onto the review Great theme - love the suspense and intrigue but when you ...
Jul 24, 2015 -
Re: Worlds Collide (Part 4)
I've read all 4 chapters and this is so great! I love both hp and doctor who. ive just got a few questions for the author. Is hermione married to ...
Jul 24, 2015