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Re: bathing suit
Hello! I enjoyed the idea of this poem; however, I think that you can expand a bit on the imagery and sensory descriptions, and don't forget to start with capital ...
Apr 9, 2015
Hello! I enjoyed the idea of this poem; however, I think that you can expand a bit on the imagery and sensory descriptions, and don't forget to start with capital ...
Apr 9, 2015
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