jessi123

This is good...definitely agree it could be a song, by The Clash or something,ha. But yeah I like it, I don't agree that you should think about changing it. Subject ...

I quite like it actually, definitely isn't bad. I reckon short poems are the best kind, getting too over the top with imagery can get well boring sometimes, so this ...

This is really good, dark but good. I agree with whoever called it emo.....but as emo is short for emotional then it can be considered a compliment. It IS emotional, ...

It's coming to an end With my boy and me, I'm leaving town So it's best that I'm free, Yet for months I've had planned If anyone's hurt, not me, ...