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Re: A Return to Peace
It's taking shape, but I do have some comments. Firstly, as a reader, I found it difficult to believe the story in first person (the character talking about themselves) because ...
Apr 4, 2009
It's taking shape, but I do have some comments. Firstly, as a reader, I found it difficult to believe the story in first person (the character talking about themselves) because ...
Apr 4, 2009
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