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Re: Santa Fe Sunset (2)
I love it. I think you will definitely get this publish. Well, good luck! --Jessie.
Sep 18, 2009 -
Re: Untitled. Prologue and chapter one.
Okay.. So this isn't true. Well my real best friend is named Brittnie. But she never got shot. But I am guessing the feelings. Well hope you enjoy. Please review ...
Sep 17, 2009 -
Re: you're Not Perfect.
Hi! I know this is probably boring. But I don't want to rush things. So the coming chapters will be better!! Hope you review! Thanks.. Jessie. :D :elephant: -------------------------------------------
Sep 16, 2009 -
Re: Santa Fe Sunset
Ah! I really liked it.. Can you please, please post another chapter? It's so good!! If you do I will read it. I want to find out why he has ...
Sep 13, 2009 -
Re: Santa Fe Sunset
Ah! I really liked it.. Can you please, please post another chapter? It's so good!! If you do I will read it. I want to find out why he has ...
Sep 13, 2009 -
Re: House Warming
I need this reviewed because it is a contest entry at my school and I dont trust my teacher :D Anne lifted the last box marked dishes/(no space) utensils out ...
Sep 12, 2009 -
Re: I Think That I'm Falling Again
I like the whole idea how the bear talks to her. I really like. Since the person above me got every thing wrong.. You're pretty much good. I think you ...
Sep 3, 2009 -
Re: Family Kidnapped By Ninjas--Need Ransom
I like the beginning of this. I think you should continue writing. I did not see any mistakes... Jessie.
Sep 1, 2009 -
Re: Do You Remember?
Aha. I loved that
Aug 28, 2009 -
Re: Rainbow
Oh Abbi! I loved it! I've probably told you this before. I really hope you write more.. Can you please? It will stink if you don't write more. Well I ...
Aug 28, 2009 -
Re: Chapter One
I like it. But I think your dream paragraphs be shorter. Thats the only thing that I think you should do! If you write more I will deff. read more=].. ...
Aug 24, 2009 -
Re: You're Not Perfect.
Sorry I haven't wrote any thing. I am truly sorry. I went back home to Mass, because my grandfather had a heart up attack, and my phone was acting up. ...
Aug 23, 2009 -
Re: Portrait of a Puppy
That is so cute! I love it. I like how you drew the flower. But Wow! The puppy is awsome! I tried to draw like a snowman on te paint ...
Aug 11, 2009 -
Re: Forbidden Love; Chapter 1.
I liked it. I think you should make it longer and add more detail. But other than that it was great. I think you hsould describe Trent more. Like his ...
Aug 11, 2009 -
Re: Chapter one of "Didn't Know"
I like it. You forgot to capitalize a lot of I's. But I like this story. I hope your write more. I would love to keep reading. Other than the ...
Aug 7, 2009