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  • Lyrics » General, General Re: I'd Cry (An "I'd Lie" by Taylor Swift Parody) *contest entry

    When I read the title I thought it was going to be about an ex-boyfriend, but instead it was about friends! It makes me think it was like saying bye ...

    Jul 25, 2010
  • Article / Essay » Review, General Re: The Best Book Ever Read

    A really good series is Stephanie Plum! It's be Janet Evanoich. I think there is seventeen books. There about a bounty hunter names Stephanie Plum! I think I've read, like, ...

    May 30, 2010
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: love

    Is this suppose to be a short story? Or is it suppose to be a prologue and you can say like five years later and maybe they met again, but ...

    Dec 26, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Forever part 2

    Hi! How are you? Thamks for emailing me about the story!! I see everyone in dark shade of colors; blue, black, purple, brown. Alright, this sentence put me off. I ...

    Dec 25, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: How to Live - Chapter Four

    I've been reading your story since chapter one. But I never got to do a review because I was on my phone. Really I don't have anything to tell you ...

    Dec 21, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Forever

    I was just wondering if this is a short story or if you are going to continue it on? It would be a good long story. What I didn't understand ...

    Dec 19, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: DELETED

    Hi! How are you? I loved this story! Your title interested me, so I decided I would read it. I don't think I've ever read a story of yours. For ...

    Dec 19, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Whenever Forever Will Be - Chapter One (Part 1)

    Hi AmberJane. I really like your piece here. I hope you continue writing. I will look forward into reading your next chapter. I was getting confused though. Is the main ...

    Nov 25, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: Mrs Jones - Chapter 10

    Wow. That was good. I like the other chapters a lot better though... This one seemed boring, kinda. But I still like it. I was WAY wrong about E and ...

    Nov 18, 2009
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: summer romance

    Summer Romance! I am just going to show you some mistakes. Then I will tell you what I think=] Every girl dreams about having a summer romance once in their ...

    Oct 13, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: All Babies Are Blessings (16)

    That was nice. There's one thing that confused me though. In Chapter 15 (I think, not quite sure) it said she was 6 months pregnant. But in this chapter it ...

    Sep 28, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: White Minds (R)

    I like it. It's like really cool. You don't normally see things like this. I think you should keep it but add more description. Like explain a little in the ...

    Sep 28, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Child's play part 2

    Wow! The part about her cuts gave me chills. You're details were good. A lot better than mine=]. Well I see you have posted Chapter 2.5 so I am going ...

    Sep 25, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: perspective of an entertainer-PG13 (edited version)

    I like it. The characters are nice. I liked how you waited to describe Jenny. Abigail is quite interesting, too. I get the feeling she's been in this and is ...

    Sep 23, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: House Warming

    I need this reviewed because it is a contest entry at my school and I dont trust my teacher :D Anne lifted the last box marked dishes/(no space) utensils out ...

    Sep 12, 2009


Twenty years from now you will be more disappointed by the things you didn't do than by the ones you did. So throw off the bowlines, sail away from the safe harbor. Catch the trade winds in your sails. Explore. Dream.
— Mark Twain