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Re: Want to Write Grammatically Correct Dialogue?
It's an interesting concept for a short story here, and I reckon this is a great way to teach people how to write. The names are amusing and whilst there ...
Apr 16, 2017 -
Re: The Secret of the Costume Room
Hi! I'm kinda new to YWS, like you, but I'll review this to the best of my ability! Before we start, I want to say one thing. Fan-freaking-tastic! The idea ...
Apr 16, 2017 -
Re: Web of Deceit : a Sherlock Holmes Story {Prologue}
Hello! As a huge closet BBC Sherlock fan, I really pay attention to the slight details of these fanfics. I'm sure most of these points have already been pointed out, ...
Apr 16, 2017 -
Re: Persephone's Prophecy
Hi Brooklyn! I really liked the idea, but there are some bits that I will point out to help you make future ideas better :) There are some bits that ...
Apr 16, 2017