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  • Short Story » General, General Re: things happen

    thanks alot for the tips.

    Feb 28, 2018
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: The last to escape from Caranar

    hey. This is Joesanfro. Mabey at the beginning, turn "Let me start from the beginning..." into another paragraph. Also, change " and me and some...". Pay attention to punctuation. Overall, ...

    Feb 27, 2018


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