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Shivers violently rippled through my entire body. I trembled with agonizing fear. Sweat rolled off my nose, and steam rose up from the cold, concrete floor. I was not quite ...

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I totally understand I don't care much for this poem myself I dont even know why I posted it!! Thanks for your comment though please check out my short story ...

I totally understand I don't care much for this poem myself I dont even know why I posted it!! Thanks for your comment though please check out my short story ...

I don't really car for this poem myself. I don't know why I posted it. Please check out my short stoies though!!

I totally understand I don't care much for this poem myself I dont even know why I posted it!! Thanks for your comment though please check out my short story ...

I totally understand I don't care much for this poem myself I dont even know why I posted it!! Thanks for your comment though please check out my short story ...

I totally understand I don't care much for this poem myself I dont even know why I posted it!! Thanks for your comment though please check out my short story ...

I totally understand I don't care much for this poem myself I dont even know why I posted it!! Thanks for your comment though please check out my short story ...

I totally understand I don't care much for this poem myself I dont even know why I posted it!! Thanks for your comment though please check out my short story ...

I loved it :pirate3:

I absolutely love concept. It is great. Make a few ajustments here and there. For example, some of the rhymes seemed a little forced, and the flow of the lines ...

I don't quite understand it. But I still liked the phrasing and the length

I really liked it. My favorite part was: And now the bones come, fallingfrom our endless dreamscape,where the onyx bowl at the rainbow’s end spews wraiths,and screams; forever lost,in the ...

That was very awesome!! I loved it!! It is a lot better then my poems are turning out to be!!! Keep up the awesome writing!!! :D